Here is my 3rd elevator pitch: https://youtu.be/DFQOqW4GmOI
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
The feedback of three comments that I got were all positive. They were all impressed by how I took the time to reflect on my last elevator pitch and said they could really see the changes in the latest one. Specifically, they all could tell that my voice definitely was stronger and more confident which is something I wanted to change.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
It is becoming way more comfortable to speak in front of the camera and not feel awkward. The comfortability of being in front of a camera is definitely affecting the way I speak and present myself. After watching all three in a row, I can really tell a change in my confidence and my demeanor. I did not really change anything in specific as I didn't have an critiques in my feedback; however, I am practicing in becoming a better public speaker. I am using this as an opportunity to improve my storytelling skills to really connect with my audience. I changed my hook just a little bit. I wanted to see what else I could come up with.
Hello Grace!
ReplyDeleteAwesome job on your third elevator pitch. I think its great that you have received positive feedback and be able to use it to improve your elevator pitch even more. I also find it hard to speak in front of a camera and this class has definitely given me good practice to work on this. Its great that you are able to see a difference in all of your elevator pitches.
Hey Grace!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your final elevator pitch! I loved your opening scene, as it is very eye-opening and catchy to the audience. You have a great idea that a lot of people would benefit from in today’s era as more people are focusing on their health and bodies. You spoke very clearly and followed all of the directions. Overall, great job!
Grace,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you are feeling more comfortable practicing talking in front of the camera, which is good because eventually it will be in front of groups of business professionals. You were speaking clearly and it allowed to the audience to not loose interest in what you were saying!