For my first elevator pitch, I was surprised by all the positive feedback I got. Of the three comments I received, all of them loved my introduction with a hook as it really got them to pay attention to the rest. Because of that, I will be keeping my introduction! One of the comments gave me constructive criticism on my speaking, which I do agree with. I really need to learn to speak up more confidently and enunciate better. So with that, I tried my best! The comments also enjoyed the way I talked with my hands as it made me look more enthusiastic about my product. The only thing I changed in my elevator pitch was my enunciation and "direct eye contact".
Hey Grace,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your elevator pitch 2! I like how you incorporated the same idea that you had in the first one but included more detail and explanation. I really like how you took time to reflect on the things people said on the first elevator pitch. It is clear that you took your time and really explained your idea in depth! Great job!
Hey Grace!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your second elevator pitch! Comparing it to your first elevator pitch, I can see that you have made many improvements. Your voice is easy to hear, you are very comfortable in front of the camera, and you were still able to grab the audience’s attention with ease. Overall, I believe you did a great job on this week’s elevator pitch and blog post!
Hey grace!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job evaluating your feedback on your elevator pitch. I think its good that you were able to determine what needed more work and what you already accomplished well. I also find it to be one of my weaknesses that I don’t speak up enough and that I can sometimes mumble my words because of the nerves. Overall great job!