Hey Grace! I think the way you spoke to your audience was great. You were very enthusiastic with hand motions to keep us engaged. It seemed as if you were connecting with your audience by asking questions and making your points clear. I also think its great that you memorized your pitch and didn’t have to look down at your notes.
Great job with this first pitch! I really enjoyed watching it and it was entertaining, very clever introduction! This is a really smart idea, and everyone could benefit from this! The smart toilet will definitely provide convenience and less doctor appointments which everyone would love. This was also very professional and timely and clearly stated your point! Great job!
Hey Grace! Great job with your elevator pitch! You seemed very natural while performing. I enjoyed your opening because it was a way to catch someone’s attention while they are watching you perform your pitch. One thing I would correct would be your voice. It would be extremely beneficial to enunciate your words and talk louder so the people can clearly hear the points you are trying to get across. Overall, great job!
Hey Grace! I think the way you spoke to your audience was great. You were very enthusiastic with hand motions to keep us engaged. It seemed as if you were connecting with your audience by asking questions and making your points clear. I also think its great that you memorized your pitch and didn’t have to look down at your notes.
ReplyDeleteHey Grace,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with this first pitch! I really enjoyed watching it and it was entertaining, very clever introduction! This is a really smart idea, and everyone could benefit from this! The smart toilet will definitely provide convenience and less doctor appointments which everyone would love. This was also very professional and timely and clearly stated your point! Great job!
Hey Grace!
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your elevator pitch! You seemed very natural while performing. I enjoyed your opening because it was a way to catch someone’s attention while they are watching you perform your pitch. One thing I would correct would be your voice. It would be extremely beneficial to enunciate your words and talk louder so the people can clearly hear the points you are trying to get across. Overall, great job!